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Minuend

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So, I was laying in bed thinking of Kuu (sorry, Kuu, it was all very non-sexual) and I started wondering what it meant. Then I obviously remembered it was that character in that anime I watched once long time ago. Then I figured it sounded more like the chirping of a pigeon. Kuuu, kuuu, you know.

Anyways, this inspired a short poem and it all went downhill from there.

Oh, btw, I never read or write poems.

I'd like to read more poetry, though, I just can't find the kind I like. You know, those poems that has abstract meanings so that you can quote it and seem very intellectual. That kind.

Oh, yes, here's the poems.

They aren't supposed to be good, they are nonsensical.

Also, I think Bird will like the structure of these poems.

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Kuu is the sound pidgeons make
Kuu is the sound of a heart break
So forgotten
So unrecognized

Alone

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There are no footprints
Only cracks
Through the Earth
Immortal will represented
Poisonous roots
Descending wings
Ruler of all
Oh, how
Cavalier

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Bread is rarely popular
Except in Norway
Hidden benefits
Luscious nutritions
Cheese and mayonnaise

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Computers are random
Still there is knowledge
Look beyond the lolcats

~~~;]//:-

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Droplets of rain
Becoming a pond
Moments unknown
To an unknown eye
An tile of cation and anion.

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Was it ever ice?
Was it not frozen water?
They say there is no difference
Yet
There is
Polaris

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Rage and cold
Separated thrones
Both destroyers
Of the innocent mind
Thread not here
My dear, fuck you

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A single star on the sky
Discrete
One in a million
Still one in a million
Let me wish upon you
 

Polaris

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I didn't see this until now. It is clever and beautiful, thank you Min.

:)
 

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I'm very disturbed, contemplating the possible meanings of mayonnaise. :kilroy:
 

Polaris

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I'm very disturbed, contemplating the possible meanings of mayonnaise. :kilroy:

:eek:

Cheese, you have yet again managed to pervert the beauty of the written word....shame on you.




:D
 

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Loving the love, Polaris...loving the luuuurv.
 
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